The Crying Girl
I
Am the ear who hears
The little girl’s cry
Of suffering, with genuine tears.
She, at a young age
Encounters what occurs at adult phase.
The rejection, the inhumane punishments,
Are all common to her, but she chases
Love, emancipation, peace. She cries
Like a lost angel in
The infinitesimal horizon. She lies,
Out of fear, her actual feelings.
The bruises in her arms are small gems
But were kept out of shame. Pity!
Pity her heart perforated and stained,
At a very young age. Mercy,
I am calling out to thou,
To dry her tears
And console the crying girl, the persecuted Jew.
Happiness, Justice. Come near her.
But I fret
Her when she gets
Old. Would she inculcate
The insults? And use it
As a vengeance to the culprit
Who maltreated the girl
With the entire devil’s might?
Unfortunately, I prophesy.
And there she was, crying.
Thanks to those who read and gave their criticisms on The Common Man! I appreciate it. You don’t have idea how indebted I am. Now I am inspired to write more poems and articles (please read my former posts regarding travels).
I wrote this poem with great conviction; this is somehow a true story. It is really hard to watch an angel cry. What do you think of the poem? There is a comment box below, and you can write everything you want. Cheers!
PS, thanks to those who helped! My problem on line breaks is resolved!

A beautiful story of love. I too watched an angel from Heaven cry and it broke my heart wanting to help wipe away his tears. He’ll always be a little boy, in a grown man’s body being the warrior he is fighting a cruel world. I’d rather see an angel smile and if I can help make that smile, makes me smile back. I suppose we all need to feel hell so we can appreciate what Heaven is really about, Mercy. Peace
well said,. It is really sad to see naive ones suffering against world’s harshness. Thanks for reading and I hope you will follow my blogs. Literally.
Kloyde, your “Crying Girl” sounds that it was born from a feeling of compassion for the oppressed and of an inward understanding of the sad realities of Life; persons at rest and at peace within themselves exhibit these two emotions of love for Mankind. I like Crying Girl and bid you remember that only ‘Servants’ (to Mankind) count. Keep up the good work!
thank you sir! I hope that you will never get tired on my poems. I have a previous post entitled The Common Man. If you don’t have time, feel free to read and write your comments below/. cheers!
this is extremely well crafted. kudos to you good sir.
hearing that from you sir is bliss! Continue reading!
Well done
thanks man!
I love the line ‘The infinitesimal horizon’, and also ‘The bruises in her arms are small gems’, it makes the brutal gentle somehow. Very intriguing and that photo of the statue makes it all more atmospheric.
thanks sir!!! look forward to my recent post soon! it’s about my trip at Maitum, a municipality in Philippines with a lot of cool spots.
child abuse is a difficult topic to write about but you’ve done a good job here with your sensitive and honest verse… there are always scars but some manage to find their way out of the pain..others don’t
thank you for the comment madam! please continue to read my posts. thanks!
Oh… such a pity.. I actually pictured a poor little girl crying .. : ( beautifuly written. Keep them coming..
thanks for appreciating man!!!