Poetry: The Crying Girl

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The Crying Girl

Kloyde Caday

 

I

Am the ear who hears

The little girl’s cry

Of suffering, with genuine tears.

 

She, at a young age

Encounters what occurs at adult phase.

The rejection, the inhumane punishments,

Are all common to her, but she chases

 

Love, emancipation, peace. She cries

Like a lost angel in

The infinitesimal horizon. She lies,

Out of fear, her actual feelings.

 

The bruises in her arms are small gems

But were kept out of shame. Pity!

Pity her heart perforated and stained,

At a very young age. Mercy,

 

I am calling out to thou,

To dry her tears

And console the crying girl, the persecuted Jew.

Happiness, Justice. Come near her.

 

But I fret

Her when she gets

Old. Would she inculcate

The insults? And use it

 

As a vengeance to the culprit

Who maltreated the girl

With the entire devil’s might?

Unfortunately, I prophesy.

 

And there she was, crying.

 

Thanks to those who read and gave their criticisms on The Common Man! I appreciate it. You don’t have idea how indebted I am. Now I am inspired to write more poems and articles (please read my former posts regarding travels).

I wrote this poem with great conviction; this is somehow a true story. It is really hard to watch an angel cry. What do you think of the poem? There is a comment box below, and you can write everything you want. Cheers!

PS, thanks to those who helped! My problem on line  breaks is resolved!

14 Responses »

  1. A beautiful story of love. I too watched an angel from Heaven cry and it broke my heart wanting to help wipe away his tears. He’ll always be a little boy, in a grown man’s body being the warrior he is fighting a cruel world. I’d rather see an angel smile and if I can help make that smile, makes me smile back. I suppose we all need to feel hell so we can appreciate what Heaven is really about, Mercy. Peace

  2. Kloyde, your “Crying Girl” sounds that it was born from a feeling of compassion for the oppressed and of an inward understanding of the sad realities of Life; persons at rest and at peace within themselves exhibit these two emotions of love for Mankind. I like Crying Girl and bid you remember that only ‘Servants’ (to Mankind) count. Keep up the good work!

    • thank you sir! I hope that you will never get tired on my poems. I have a previous post entitled The Common Man. If you don’t have time, feel free to read and write your comments below/. cheers!

  3. I love the line ‘The infinitesimal horizon’, and also ‘The bruises in her arms are small gems’, it makes the brutal gentle somehow. Very intriguing and that photo of the statue makes it all more atmospheric.

  4. child abuse is a difficult topic to write about but you’ve done a good job here with your sensitive and honest verse… there are always scars but some manage to find their way out of the pain..others don’t

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